高考史以来第一篇、也是唯一一篇获满分的诗歌作文


作者: 吴文筠 | 2010年09月28日 11:44 | 栏目: 时间是码头***********************焚心不为等候*********
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 谢谢扣子给我发来这个邮件。幻灯片没有办法在这里上传。网上搜到有这个可以分享的视频:

土豆网配乐赏读这首《选择》     http://www.tudou.com/programs/view/6qsQpEi9OGE/

去年高考作文诗歌体滿分作品 毛敏的作文《選擇》,已成為大陸滿分「詩歌」型作文的絕響。

如果我是一片云,
我会放弃高高在上,
我选择化作一滴滴小雨飘落人间。
你要问我为什么,
请看看那些郁郁葱葱的生命,
那,就是我的答案。

If I were a cloud
I would give up staying high up
I choose to become a raindrop scattering down to world
You ask me why
Please look at those sad and moody lives
That is my reply

如果我是一支河流,
我会放弃奔流到海,
我选择化为甘泉流入麦田。
你要问我为什么,
请听听农民伯伯喜悦的笑声,
那,就是我的答案。

If I were a river
I would give up flowing into the sea
I choose to turn into a sweet stream flowing into the wheat field
You ask me why
Please listen to the laughter of happiness from the farmers
That is my answer

如果我是一株灵芝,
我会放弃长命百岁,
我选择化为一滴滴药汤灌入人口中。
你要问我为什么,
请看看那位康复病人的笑脸,
那,就是我的答案。

If I were an ancient wild mushroom
I would give up immortality
I choose to be melt into healing drops flowing down people's throat
You ask me why
Please have a look at the recovering patient's smiling face
That is my reply

如果我是一块矿石,
我会放弃平静安逸,
我选择熔入炉中化为滚烫的钢水。
你要问我为什么,
请看看那一座座的高楼大厦,
那,就是我的答案。

If I were an ore
I would give up peace and comfort
I choose to be melt in the pot and become boiling hot steel
You ask me why
Please have a look at all the high rise
That is my answer

如果我是一只白鸽,
我会放弃自由嬉戏,
我选择永不停息地把橄榄枝衔到战争的国度。
你要问我为什么,
请看看那些饱受战争痛苦的儿童正在快乐地玩耍,
那,就是我的答案。

If I were a dove
I would give up playing freely
I choose to deliver the olive branch
to war torn countries tirelessly
You ask me why
Please look at the once war tortured
children playing happily
That is my reply

人生,
是一篇做不完的选择题,
向前?
向后?
往左?
往右?
如果你已迷失方向,
瞧瞧你心灵中的真、善、美吧,
那,就是你的答案。

Life
An endless multiple choice question
Go forth
Step back
To the left
Turn right
If you have lost your direction
Look into your heart
The truth, the kindness, and beauty
That is your answer

6 条 关于 "高考史以来第一篇、也是唯一一篇获满分的诗歌作文" 的评论

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张琰 | IP地址: 124.119.7.* | 2010/09/28, 13:21

问候文筠,祝长假快乐!

吴文筠 | IP地址: 114.92.13.* | 2010/09/28, 13:37

十月金秋,是俺也想爬上去躺着的那张(最下面那张)图片上的季节:)长假快乐!

张琰 | IP地址: 124.119.7.* | 2010/09/28, 13:21

真是一篇佳作啊~~

吴文筠 | IP地址: 114.92.13.* | 2010/09/28, 13:34

是啊,今天邮箱里收到朋友发来的这个分享的邮件,就想着如何能让更多的朋友们一起分享。
找了一下“图片收藏”,把最美的两张一直舍不得用的图片,“毅然而然”送给了它:)

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